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Axel: I'm Your Angel With A Shotgun(CRITIQUE ME) by KuemomoShousa

:iconminarosario:
(uf its difficult to critique...ah!i know!)
well , i've been drawings a lots of bird's wings, and i know that this drawing need more wings (but i love the drawing!! aayyy :( ...) ....and...i think that nothing more...maybe you can put shine(i don't know if i put it well O_O) like on the hair,but on the shirt or trousers ..hmm...the eye i think is really big , but cool becuse you put it in blue, the gum its awesome too , the position..its incomode for the guy, i think, if you try to put that pose..your neck its going yo hurt you like me writting this ''critique''
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:iconkuemomoshousa:
KuemomoShousa Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
((Remember, I speak enough Spanish that you don't have to use English when you comment, critique, or whatever. =P))
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minarosario Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
i don't want to critique!! :(
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KuemomoShousa Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
((haha~ I didn't say you had to! =P It was optional! But you did really great~ That was an awesome effort~))
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minarosario Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
(( :D thanks ^^ ))
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